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another problem with this file is that
the paragraphs have been set adrift...
the spacing between paragraphs is
too large. it's as if there are two
blank lines between each paragraph.
one would be sufficient.
indeed, since these paragraphs are
also indented, some people would
"inform" you that there should be no
blank space between the paragraphs.
they'll tell you that you have to use
either block-style or indent-style.
i don't know about that. i kinda like
the hybrid style, especially with only
half a blank line between paragraphs.
but two blank lines between paragraphs?
that's clearly too much, and it's a big flaw
on pages like this, with many paragraphs.
(pages with a lot of dialog are the worst.)
also note that the last few paragraphs
on this page are not tagged correctly...
they're in a different font, monospaced,
and with the formatting being improper.
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